My Writing Progress

My first write up on the essay was very disorganized and unclear. My use of periods and other punctuation marks were inaccurate. There was no use of paragraphs and my sentences did not relate to the topic given. My essay would have been a score of one or two, but after looking and reading through the rubric and sample essays, I learnt a few writing skills. I learnt when and how to use a paragraph, I included some transitional words into my essay. My essay related really well to the topic. Looking at the essay that scored a six, I also saw the writers use of grammar and language. I then improved my own use of  language. After all these notices and corrections, I believe my essay will definitely score a five or six.